I love how excited the two Cs are. I think my favorite line though was that "another whole day of me watching you watching me watch you." That was great!
The bits from Enjolras' POV were wonderful. From the set up, the reader already know what Fey and Ferre are thinking at each turn, but Enjy has no idea. No it's fascinating to watch how he struggles to interpret or how he responds to them.
And it's great how unconcerned he is with it all. "Okay." "What do you mean 'okay?'" "Uh, 'okay'." "No, you've GOT to have more of an opinion than that!" "I do?"
Heh, I was left wondering if Bahorel figured it out... or if the through crossed his mind and he was like "Nahhh". I can't tell if those guesses about what political activity they were up to were ironic or not...
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I love how excited the two Cs are.
I think my favorite line though was that "another whole day of me watching you watching me watch you." That was great!
The bits from Enjolras' POV were wonderful. From the set up, the reader already know what Fey and Ferre are thinking at each turn, but Enjy has no idea. No it's fascinating to watch how he struggles to interpret or how he responds to them.
And it's great how unconcerned he is with it all.
"Okay."
"What do you mean 'okay?'"
"Uh, 'okay'."
"No, you've GOT to have more of an opinion than that!"
"I do?"
Heh, I was left wondering if Bahorel figured it out... or if the through crossed his mind and he was like "Nahhh". I can't tell if those guesses about what political activity they were up to were ironic or not...